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Critiques
The colors you've used give this scene a warmness about it.
You've really improved on your highlights. The sheen on her hair was pulled off flawlessly and the shadows aren't too dark so they don't draw attention. Her eyes look very bright and attractive as well.
The beams of light were a nice touch. Try extending them a bit more and having them fade at the ends; I don't think they would just stop before reaching her head.
The bed could use a bit more detail. It's the only part of the picture that doesn't have an outline, so it looks a bit like still water. Maybe add a pillow or two like =phoenixflaym said.
Late Critique is late - Sorry for that ^_^;
I like the way you textured her fur and hair too, but I think her bangs would look better opaque; I've never liked the "anime translucent bangs that show the eyes underneath" thing.
I'd recommend adding more details to the picture; right now it looks kind of plain. For example, maybe some things on the wall, a pillow or two on the bed or some fringe to the blanket.
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